Jack of Club
I have..
left you indulge in me
In a shuffled & predictable pack,
as jack of clubs
and queen of spades.
misplaced and caught
in odd set of games
with bad poker hands
your entry, exit & wordplay
cleave me to pieces
like a serrated knife
hmmm irony it is
even if I play
King of dice
and you,
the queen of (someone’s) heart..
left you indulge in me
In a shuffled & predictable pack,
as jack of clubs
and queen of spades.
misplaced and caught
in odd set of games
with bad poker hands
your entry, exit & wordplay
cleave me to pieces
like a serrated knife
hmmm irony it is
even if I play
King of dice
and you,
the queen of (someone’s) heart..
posted by Φ at 3:02 PM
15 Comments:
oh wow...the guy is back
the king is back...
even if I play
King of dice
and you,
the queen of (someone’s) heart
Fantastic end...U gotit right there King.
Ah, V!
you'd still play to lose...nice to have you back. :)
wow! long time, no? :)
i really liked ...
that was a classic...loved it ...hmm well loved it again...:)
thwas excellent vnthi...the last verses got me captivated...I must go wid sophie....u are indeed back!
(sigh!) ... :)))
you no Jack, you King- you rule!
ps: I only feel that in the last line, the 'someone' need not be there... 'queen of hearts' is explanatory enough...
and here... am wishing for a king of my heart!! :)
hey Vinod,
amazing write up and yep, i read each every one of them on the blog,...all the three!
thanks for dropping by!
-N
thanks phi!! :)
why no updates?? :(
but then, i know.. sometimes.. the words just flow.. sometimes.. all is blank... noise... and these fishes are tough to catch! :)
you take care!
That was something! Interesting actually....
The queen of (someone's hear) that was beautiful.
Missed reading you.
:-)
70 thots wrapped up in a game? bring it on....
peace..!!
\m/
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